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I guess it's me. by ~Rag-Dolly:iconRag-Dolly:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


I saw myself reflected in your eyes,
And noticed something was missing here.
I guess it's me, I guess it's me,
As I stare back at your reflection.

I wonder now, I wonder how,
This may have occured.
Is it just me, is it just me,
Or is my day already cursed.

I stare from above and see me walking,
But something isn't right.
I guess it's me, I guess it's me,
As I see you limping along.

I try and act like I always do,
Pretend not to notice.
This gaping hole inside of me,
Where I guess my hope is.

I saw myself reflected in your eyes,
And noticed something was missing here.
Now I know yes, now I know,
That something, I guess it's me.
©2007-2009 ~Rag-Dolly
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Author's Comments

Erm..
I guess this is a sort of song/ poem thing that I came up with (Omgosh not again!? ).

It's about a girl who doesn't realise she's passed away. She's haunting her brother and starts realising there's something missing, subconsiously she knows she's gone but she hasn't been able to accept it yet.

If I ever get good enough with my art that I can start making short clips of anime (or AMVs or something) then I might be able to show you what I saw in my head, but that's not too likely.

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~meredithbrooksrulez Jun 6, 2007, 5:36:12 PM
Ooh I really liked this, especially this stanza.

"I try and act like I always do,
Pretend not to notice.
This gaping hole inside of me,
Where I guess my hope is."

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I'm a bitch, I'm a lover,I'm a child, I'm a mother,I'm a sinner, I'm a saint,I do not feel ashamed,I'm your hell, I'm your dream i'm nothing in between, you know you wouldn't want it any other way-meredith brooks
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~Rag-Dolly Jun 7, 2007, 5:13:51 AM
Thanks, I think that's my favourite part too.

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~gemini86 Jun 7, 2007, 9:09:06 AM
I knew it was a song! wa ha! It is a very interesting concept. *nod nod*

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~Rag-Dolly Jun 7, 2007, 2:16:18 PM
Thanks ^_^

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¤~¤
If you cheat, you'll have already lost.
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Life's boring without challenges.
¤~¤
~~Theft is an Art of it's own too, but that doesn't mean we should encourage it.~~
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`emmil Apr 27, 2009, 5:42:28 AM
sounds so sad... but I love it! ^__^

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~Rag-Dolly Apr 27, 2009, 5:48:53 AM
Thank you! <3 Nice to know my older works still speak to others <3 Thanks as well for the fav :D

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¤~¤
If you cheat, you'll have already lost.
¤
Life's boring without challenges.
¤~¤
~~Theft is an Art of it's own too, but that doesn't mean we should encourage it.~~
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`emmil Apr 27, 2009, 5:52:01 AM
nps... I love writing poems too sometime, a bunch of them here: [link] XD

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~Rag-Dolly Apr 27, 2009, 6:15:30 AM
Sometimes it really helps doesnt it ^^ By the way, your artwork is really amazing, and your poems have promise, just work a little more on Grammer and sentence structure (I know it's not your native language but it's easy to find something to help you with both =3 ) and I think you'll be really good :D

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¤~¤
If you cheat, you'll have already lost.
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Life's boring without challenges.
¤~¤
~~Theft is an Art of it's own too, but that doesn't mean we should encourage it.~~
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`emmil Apr 27, 2009, 6:39:29 AM
thank you for the kind words... :hug:

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